It’s raining outside
And inside of him as well
The raindrops knocking at the glass window
Of his temporal existence they tell
The clothes and the curtains dampened
Likewise, his spirits too
The sky turning grey
Enough to restrict his vision to a foot or two
The sight of a kid on the street
Dancing merrily in the rain
Reminds him of his cherished childhood days
The time he can’t regain
The puddles on the road
With the paper boats afloat
The washed green trees
And their fallen yellow leaves
The peacock’s crested head
And its large fanlike tail
The earthworms from the sand
That slithered on the garden rail
A smile crosses his face
As he remembers the life that was
As distant as it is now from him
He savoured the little trip to the past
The present wasn’t so pleasant
All the planning fell apart
Not that he could do much about it
Bad luck played a big part
It consoled him for a while
To know that he’s not alone
There were hundreds of other mortals
Fighting the same battle on their own
He wished he knew the end
To this pain and distraught
To the annoyance of being a victim
Of circumstance and not his fault
He looked out in the grey
In a hope to find an answer
A vibrant rainbow appeared at the horizon
And the smile returned; this time it was wider!
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Very well written. exrmly imaginative and magical. A poet to look out for....
very profound but very nicely expressed !!!
:-) very well written and I know the feeling very well too..
very cool :)
Beautifully written !
loved this post :)
welcome back re :)
and what a post..
loved the ending..I hope the smile gets wider still :)
tc
I know the inspiration behind this post... I have lived it myself.
But hear the words coming from a friend...
These times of despair are nearing an end...
For luck shines upon us all...
You too shall rise after this fall.
"Hope is a good thing may be the best of things and no good thing ever dies" :)
Wow..I've read this multiple times now n it still leaves me speechless! Amazing work :) & remember J-e-M..."Good things take time!" Keep writing!!
Amazing.. like its always been..
It was almost like re-living a phase of my life yet again!..
Words, when put together, can say all that you want. But, when put together like this, can talk about things unsaid.
Thats one of the most greatest arts. To mean it without saying it..! You have it..nurture it :)
Just awesome!
The rain is captured beautifully as an emotion.. Just found your blog. And this post made me stop.
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