Cupid strikes
He’s hit
She evades
Cupid waits
He tries
She resists
Cupid strikes again
He’s hit again
She evades again
Cupid’s baffled
He’s hurting
She’s indifferent
Cupid’s pondering
He’s cursing
She’s receding
Cupid flies away
He waits
She waits...too
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Amazing!!! Brevity is the soul of wit.. This post proves it..
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I think cupid was the wisest of them all...
yea...so true...cupid was the wisest...sometimes its best to let go ;)
the awesomeness of this post lies in its simplicity :D
This is you nowww!! :)
Bravo my friend.. loved the post..
tell me you were struck and she didnt evade ;).. i am waiting for that day!!! hahaha..
ahhhhhhhhhhhh! brilliant thought...... loved the way of have weaved it in words..........
I agree with Sahil.."The awesomeness of this poem is in its simplicity!" Love it! :)
Hey very nice blog!! Man .. Beautiful .. Amazing .. I will bookmark your blog and take the feeds also...
haha@flies away... nice to be back to this blog..
cheers
Skeets
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